the story so far..

issy is walking through fields, waiting for someone and being captured. all of these clips are placed randomly as to show that her thoughts are mixed up and it's almost as if her life is flashing before her eyes.
the last two clips of the flashbacks are almost as if it's showing that she's waking up as it gets faster, and it's quite distorted. the beginning clips are in the perspective of the person filming her, e.g, the man who kidnaps her.
she then wakes up after the distorted clips, and is shown in a room, the audience should see that she is being filmed by a CCTV camera which gives the feeling of knowing she's being watched by someone. the time in the clips jump, to show that time is going on and she's still in the same place. when the title pops up, (4am), it goes back to her being in the room, but she notices the camera and goes to see if it is actually there, a door slams, and she looks shocked and fears for her life as it is 4am.. which is why we called it that. she then shouts, and it cuts out to CIA films, which is the name of our production company.
we then got told to add more to it, so we went out and filmed a scene with becky and myself, to show that she is the next victim. we stuck to the conventions as becky is a brunette, and the brunette usually survives, whereas issy is a blonde and the blonde dies first. we feel that this scene establishes the fact that becky is the next victim, as we talk about her moving away to where we filmed issy walking in the fields.

we're generally happy with our storyline, though we think it may have been better if we had had the recently filmed scene at the beginning of the film instead of the end, but we're happy with how it's turned out.